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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicle, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There are several opinions associated with
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 including the reduction of the maximum speed limit.
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 there are some other measures that can be taken to ensure
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. At present in urban areas, awareness about
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 has achieved a lot of importance because
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's
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 is dependent on it. Maximum speed limit reduction is regarded as the best solution for improving
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 for some
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,
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 especially the young generation frequently increase speed limits
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 driving on the
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, there are numerous causes related to
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 as they want to celebrate life by doing
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 or sometimes they are in a hurry on their way to the office.
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 hurry can lead to a catastrophe or even life loss. A recent study demonstrates that
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 approximately 40% of
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 accidents are caused by overspeeding. So if we desire a safe
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 for everyone we should concentrate on speeding.
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 speeding is the most vital cause of
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 accidents, I personally believe that, that there are other ways of reducing
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 accidents.
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 my point of view,
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 is not confined to speeding but other causes are associated with it. Several crimes can happen related to
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, drunken driving, not obeying traffic regulations or lack of proper maintenance of the
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 infrastructures. To enhance our
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 on
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 we should give equal importance to all areas. If we give priority to solving only one problem and ignore others, we never achieve a safe traffic system.
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, not only making policies about
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 but rather the implementation of them should be encouraged.
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,
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safety
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 is not a single issue, rather it is a combination of several causes and we should equally give them importance.
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