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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans above illustrate the recent and
future
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 design after the development of an
airport
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.
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, there will be several improvements and changes in the layout of the
airport
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. In the
future
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airport
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, some parts will be extended to place the additional amount of gates. Various facilities will be re-conducted aiming to make things easier for the passengers. As can be seen that the recent
airport
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 has minimum facilities rather than the
future
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 design after development. Starting
from
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next year, passengers can go through the gates via
skytrain
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,
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, it will be more
effecient
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efficient
 regarding time aspects. The other hospitality in the
future
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airport
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 includes the
existance
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existence
 of some new
feature
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features
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,
such
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 as
:
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 baggage drop to simplify
customers
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customers'
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 needs and a taxi port so that passengers don't have to walk several miles
a way
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away
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 to stop a taxi. In a nutshell, the
future
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 design of the new
airport
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 will be upgraded
than
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to
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 the recent one. It can be seen from the additional facilities
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also
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and also
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 from the different yet spacious layouts in the
airport
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.
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