The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.
The graph shows data about age, average income per person and population below the poverty line in California, Utah and Florida.
Overall
, it can be seen from the table that all groups for the state of Utah are lower than for the rest of the states except the aged under 18. Moreover
, the number of teenagers in Utal illustrates that the birth rate in this
country is elevated.
It is noticeable that the amount of average salary per person in California and Florida is slightly higher than Utal country ( about 23,000 and 22,000$ respectively). However
, the percentage of Utal’s people living below the poverty line isn’t as much as the other two countries (just 9%).
Furthermore
, from the statistics, it can be inferred that the number of elderly in 2 states California and Utal is lower than the number of the young (about 4% and 20% respectively), which means the birth rate increases more quickly than the death rate.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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