some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too iportant or too valuable to be shared freely

It is believed by some
people
that sharing
information
about scientific research,business, and academic fields is not a good idea
while
others believe that all kinds of
information
should not be freely accessible . With the advent of technology, every day huge volumes of data have publishing which
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free or not. From my point of view, these days
people
can access a wide range of
information
by using
the
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cyberspace. So It is not efficient
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to hide some
information
or prevent them from publicizing freely.
This
essay will discuss both views on the mentioned topic. On one hand, many
people
like myself think
that is
better to get all
people
free access to an array of
information
. We think in
this
way since
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not formidable to utilize some websites which help you
accessing
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to the free version of a scientific
article
or any other kind of publication.
Also
, by
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wide spreading
of updated
information
people
can have
more
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comfortable life.
For example
, if all
people
can read a valuable
article
in medicine field without paying, the health level of the
socaieties
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societies
will be improved.
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result
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many individuals share some useful
information
to help each other which helps to have a more peaceful and qualified world.
On the other hand
, some others think that the scholars and writers of articles and other kinds of publications make
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of
effert
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effort
efforts
to develop a publication and it is not fair to let many
people
utilize the
information
freely.
Although
the mentioned opinion is true,
but
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people
who do not know enough expertise and knowledge can not take advantage of any scientific
article
. So, it does not to be
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about the usage of any
article
for free.
For example
, if someone
download
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an
article
about the recent methods for using weight
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free, he or she will not use it
proprely
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properly
because in most cases they do not have knowledge. In conclusion, I guess that it
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good idea to allow all
people
accessing to various
information
freely. I think in
this
way because
the
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technology removes
the
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boundaries and by accessing to free useful
information
people
can boost their health and other
possitive
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positive
traits which helps to have a better
worls
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world
in the
forseeable
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foreseeable
future.
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