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Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants. Do you agree or disagree?

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People keep wondering if our foods are healthy, which is the one million's question.
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 the majority of people think that eating at
home
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 is beneficial, others oppose it,
This
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 essay will explain my consideration regarding cooking
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 advantages
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 as tightening family bonds and healthy
food
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. First of all, is health. Cooking meals at
home
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 tend to be more healthy than eating outsides because
first,
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it can be cooked
according to
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 family members' measurements, meanwhile eating fast
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for example
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such
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food
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 tends to have too many calories, which is harmful to our bodies.
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, the feed that people eat at restaurants and fast
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 shops could be unclean.
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, source of infection, many restaurants are considered commercial investments and owners concentrate on the financial side rather than the quality of
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,
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, low-quality
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.
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, once I ate a sandwich outside and unfortunately I found a fly inside it, so, eating
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 at house is safer. The other crucial aspect of eating homemade
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 is tightening family bonds. whenever family members sit together and eat, indeed, that will make they, discuss their issues together and share care, which leads to strengthening their relationships with each other, a clear example is my family, we used to solve our issues and discuss our daily lives events as we sit together on the
food
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 table.
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, I deduce eating at
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 is enhance family life.
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, cooking at
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 has numerous benefits,
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 the majority of the population believes eating
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 at
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 is superior, I completely agree.
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