The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles are recycled.
As an overview, the process includes nine vital activities that show how recyclable waste turns into reusable products.
To begin
, plastic
wastage is carried by garbage trucks and delivered to the recycling centre. Then
those wastage are get sorted. Sorted plastic
waste, then
compress into blocks in the fourth stage. After that, compressed blocks are crushed by machines until it becomes small pieces. Next,
crushed pieces of plastic
are washed in a tank.
Following that, cleaned plastic
pieces are processed through a machine that produces pellets of plastics. As the seventh step, pellets are transformed into raw materials by heating. Foamed raw material finally
use to make items such
as bags, pencils, lunch boxes and clothes etc.Submitted by dmdeemanthakasun on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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