Junk food advertising has a harmful effect on society and should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Recently, it has been observed that the consumption of fast
food
has drastically increased all over the world. According to
some people, advertisements
are to be blamed for this
cause. They claim that putting a ban on the promotion of junk food
is the only way to reduce its consumption. In my opinion, I completely agree with this
statement and will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin
, there are several reasons why fast food
promotion must be banned. Firstly
, children spends
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spend
majority
of their time watching television. Fast Add an article
the majority
a majority
food
companies like McDonald’s purposely advertises
through kid’s shows and Change the verb form
advertise
attracts
them into buying unhealthy Correct subject-verb agreement
attract
food
. A recent
research, Remove the article
Recent
for example
, showed that 70% of the
fast Correct article usage
apply
food
are
consumed by people after watching TV commercials. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Consequently
, the
Correct article usage
apply
advertisements
pose a great threat to people’s well-being.
In addition
, such
advertisements
usually never showcase their ingredients to public
Add an article
the public
that
may cause harmful Correct pronoun usage
which
effect
Fix the agreement mistake
effects
to
one’s self or Change preposition
on
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, large
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a large
amount
of sugar and oil added to fast Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
food
could result in high blood pressure, heart diseases
and obesity. The sugar quantity, Fix the agreement mistake
disease
for example
, is not included in a Coca Cola
ad and people are unaware of how Add a hyphen
Coca-Cola
such
promotions can negatively impact the health of their society. Resultantly, advertisements
of junk foods may become a part of individual’s
daily diet.
In conclusion, I believe advertisement of unhealthy cuisine is not only harmful but should completely be banned. The problem of excessive consumption of junk Correct article usage
an individual’s
food
can be tacked
if authorities could place different restrictions to limit children’s exposure and by informing the public about the details of what they are buying.Correct your spelling
tackled
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