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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live arthe school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for an number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

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Some people
believes
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 that sending their
children
 to study in a boarding
school
 will be beneficial to them.
However
, the issue is not straightforward, and arguments can
also
 be made against the idea.
This
 essay will discuss the debate
,
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 and give a concluding view. On the one hand, there are various benefits of
children
 attending boarding
school
. These range from learning to be independent, focusing on their study and
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no
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need
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 to travel daily.
For example
, these kids living without their parents need to rely on themselves in
majority
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 of their decisions which can help them learn
on
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 it or face the
consquences
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consequences
for
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 the wrong ones. Another argument is the time they will save in commuting to
school
, meaning that
this
 time can give them additional hours to study
instead
.
By contrast
, opponents of
this
 view point out that not all
children
 can
be
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easily blend in, in a competitive environment. Examples can be seen of aloft or bullied
children
.
In addition
, there will be some peer pressure that might help the
children
 to excel or
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.
Finally
, living away
majority
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 of days without your nuclear family can leave a damage or gap
on
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 their relationship.
Overall
, it seems advisable that
option
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 of sending
children
at
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to
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 boarding
school
is depends
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 on the
neccessity
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necessity
for
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 the family, for
me
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 it is sensible
to conclude
 that I would
preferred
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 to value being with family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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