The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated by the IT and Service-Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000. It is measured in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of
GDP
, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout
this
time. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 pe rcent of
GDP
,
whereas
IT exceeded
this
, at more than 6%. Over the next four years, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8%. IT was still higher
overall
, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
However
, over the following four years, the patterns of the two components were noticeably different. The percentage of
GDP
from IT incremented quite sharply to 12 in 1998 and
then
approximately 15 in 2000,
while
the Service Industry stayed nearly the same, increasing to only 8 %.
At the end
of the period, the percentage of
GDP
from IT was almost twice that of the Industry of service.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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