More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

A major drawback in metro cities today is the

traffic

congestion caused

due to

increasing number of cars. Nowadays, people have become dependent on travelling with their personal vehicle, rather than utilising

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public transportation.

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on

car

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causes two main problems: increased air pollution and

traffic

jams on roads. In

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essay, I will analyse the problems and provide possible solutions to

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. Private cars have increased in number

due to

the poor maintenance of public transport like city buses and metro rails,

thus

making it major means of transportation.

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increased need to travel by private car

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lead

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to

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rise in air pollution. Even if one person is travelling he will prefer a

four seater

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vehicle over a two-wheeler or bicycle.

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, the Air Quality Index is degrading

day-by-day

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in Delhi and leading to several health problems because of the harmful gases

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released into the atmosphere. The second main cause is

traffic

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jam

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on roads. Less number of people prefer travelling by metro rails, causing immense

traffic

during office hours. Owing to

this

,

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of the deaths became inevitable

due to

road accidents.

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, in case of

emergencies

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an

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Ambulance gets stuck in

traffic

for long hours. Government should look into

this

matter seriously and improvise the methods of public transport.

Additionally

, they should plan multiple stops all over the city to make it convenient for the general public. Promoting the use of bicycles can

also

be the way forward for decreasing the over-reliance on cars. The problem can be solved if all the individuals and Government officials work in harmony and change

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of the community in

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to the use of

personal

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the personal

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vehicle

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over other methods of transportation.