Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years. Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you. In the letter: - Explain how much you have missed your friend - Describe how you feel about your friend’s return - Give reasons that you and your friend should share a home

Dear Monika, Hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing
this
letter as I got to know about your plans of moving back to Bangalore after five years of your Integrated course in Germany. I was astounded when your dad told me
this
news. The
last
five years have been really difficult for me as I couldn’t make friends at work
due to
language barriers. I always used to reminisce
our
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old days and how we use to
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. To be totally honest I really missed your exuberant presence around me. I cannot express how ecstatic I am feeling upon your return, especially after knowing that you got a job in Bangalore itself.
Although
,
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your office is
little
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far from my place, we can absolutely share a home together as I have
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option of working from home.
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, we can restart our dance lessons together just like we use to do in our school days. I am eagerly waiting to meet you. Call me once you book your tickets. See you soon. Take care. Best Regards, Aishwarya
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