Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years. Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you. In the letter: - Explain how much you have missed your friend - Describe how you feel about your friend’s return - Give reasons that you and your friend should share a home

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Dear Monika, Hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing

this

letter as I got to know about your plans of moving back to Bangalore after five years of your Integrated course in Germany. I was astounded when your dad told me

this

news. The

last

five years have been really difficult for me as I couldn’t make friends at work

due to

language barriers. I always used to reminisce

our

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old days and how we use to

enjoy

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. To be totally honest I really missed your exuberant presence around me. I cannot express how ecstatic I am feeling upon your return, especially after knowing that you got a job in Bangalore itself.

Although

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your office is

little

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far from my place, we can absolutely share a home together as I have

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option of working from home.

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, we can restart our dance lessons together just like we use to do in our school days. I am eagerly waiting to meet you. Call me once you book your tickets. See you soon. Take care. Best Regards, Aishwarya

Submitted by Aishwarya on Thu Feb 02 2023

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7 paragraphs

181 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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