The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The pie charts illustrate the portion of the
energy
used by an Australian, while
the second pie chart shows the average emissions
of greenhouse gas
.
Overall
, it is clear that
in both
charts heating held the most percentage ,especially in the usage of energy
.
Regarding the first pie chart, heating accounted for just under a
half; 42 per cent, the greatest proportion. Correct article usage
apply
This
is while
heating made up only a fifth of total greenhouse gas
emissions
. Moreover
, the proportion of water heating in both
is approximately close. The corresponding figure for energy
use is almost a third and for gas
is a growth of 2 per cent; 32%. In addition
, the usage of energy
for refrigeration and lighting, are both
less effective than the figure for gas
emissions
. also
, other factors play an important role in the greenhouse gas
percentage with 28%, whereas
it makes up only 15% of the usage of energy
. According to
the data, it is noticeable to mention that in both
charts, the least percentage is held by cooking with only one person difference, with more impacts on gas
emissions
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