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Some people say that playing sports helps prepare children for their future work,while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Work and
sports
 are always said to be tied together, some people would argue that
sports
 are not only a source of
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entertainment
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entertainment
intertainment
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entertainment
 but
is
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also
 a way to keep us healthy. others would suggest that playing
sports
excessivly
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excessively
 could impact our performance to various degrees. In
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 will compare both views and explain why playing
sports
 is crucial for our development. On the
on
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 hand,
children
 are told at a young that playing
sports
 will
some how
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prepare
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 them for work. to illustrate, it's evident that coding and programming
sports
 not only educate
children
 at
young
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 age but
also
 teach them
valuble
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valuable
 lessons
such
 as problem-solving, critical thinking,
hard
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 work.
A research
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 conducted by the Minster of Education in Japan reveals that 80% of students who have participated in Hackathon competitions scored higher grades at school.
this
 shows that
sports
 play a very important role in
children
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 development and prepare them for coding jobs in the future. On the
the
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other hand, some people would argue that playing too
much
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sports
 would negatively impact
children
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 study performance . to put things into
prespective
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perspective
, excessive and long hours of training and playing physical
sports
 would make
children
 exhausted and sleepy when it comes to
do
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 school
homeworks
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homework
.
Report
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 from primary schools
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 Montreal shows that
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pupils
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 grades drop significantly when they spend over 3 hours
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of
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playing football after school.
this
 tells us that we need to regulate and set boundaries when it comes to how many hours
children
 should play
sports
.
To sum up
, I firmly believe that
sports
 in general play an important role
preparing
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 us for future jobs and in keeping our body healthy.
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