You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In the letter: describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake explain where you think the waste has come from suggest what the council should do about the problem

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to draw attention to the degrading condition of
lake
Kankariya. As you might be aware, though
lake
Kankariya is an artificial man-made
lake
, it is known for its crystal clear water.
However
last
week, when I was on a morning walk I found a couple of polythene bags floating around.
However
, I draw the attention of the cleaning staff and get it cleaned, but I am feeling that the condition is getting worse day bay, yesterday I found the north corner of the
lake
was completely filled with plastic
waste
. As a responsible senior citizen, I decided to investigate and found that; the flea market that opened recently
at
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north of the
lake
is responsible for it. I found that the owners of the stall are collecting garbage in large
waste
containers and in every morning, they dump it carelessly in the
lake
. I believe
this
is because they do not have any other place, but the
lake
, to dump
waste
. Can you please arrange a
waste
collecting truck every morning? So they do not have to dispose of
waste
in the
lake
. Hope you will act on
this
on an immediate basis and help us to keep our
lake
clean. Regards, Jay Patel
Submitted by Jay Patel on

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