The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing sparkling
water
, which consists of five stages.
To begin
with, raw water
is pumped into a filter, where it is cleaned of unnecessary substances. Then
, water
is softened and chemical elements are added to it. Following
this
, the liquid is pumped into an electric heater,where it is warmed up. After
this
, it goes into a special phial via a cooling pipe. In this
case, water
is enriched with carbon dioxide. Being carbonated, aqua is transported into a mixing tank through a vessel. In this
stage,colouring, syrup and flavour are added. Next,
the fizzy drink is filtered again and poured out into either bottles or cans. The last
step includes packaging into boxes and delivering these products to the supermarkets using vans for further
realization.
To sum up
, producing fizzy drinks is a multistage process, which includes complex machinery, specific raw materials and vans.Submitted by annaosmatesko on
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