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some people think that government should take care of diet of all individuals of country , others think that people should themselves take care of diet and health, discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #government #care #diet #individuals #country #health
A healthy
diet
 is a must for everyone to live a healthy life.owing to
this
,many individuals opine that
regime
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 should protect
to
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their citizens from unhealthy diets .meanwhile others think that it is the responsibility of every individual to maintain a healthy lifestyle the essay intends to discuss
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both prospectives and I am in favour of former view. Undeniably,there are multifarious reasons why the authority should take some steps towards the healthy
diet
 of citizens. The first and foremost reason is that there are so many food outlets which are making junk food which has a detrimental effect on the health of
massess
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masses
due to
 the high calories in the eatables items so if the
government
restriction
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 of selling fast food from street outlets
then
 the availability of eatables items less so the preference of citizen towards eatable items Change.so the
government
 can invest health care fund into another region
such
 as education and other. On the other side , many individuals believe that it is the responsibility of every person to eat healthy eatable and prevent
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health issues because nowadays everyone has educated and has enough knowledge about safety precautions so they should wash
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 properly and teach these things to their offspring so they can healthy I believe that
government
 should promote some healthy drinks
in
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 low prices so that everyone can afford and maintain a healthy
diet
as well as
 people
also
 clean their
house
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 with
protecting
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 sprays
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 a regular basis so the whole family members can save from infectious diseases. In conclusion.the participation of both individuals and the
government
 towards a healthy
diet
 can maintain a rich environment.
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