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Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English speaking countries to learn the international language English. It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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These days, the majority of students have been going to
English
-speaking countries to speak
English
 like native speakers. In
this
 environment is always a better option,
on the
contrary
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 it is not a single option to get educated. I totally agree that there are a number of facilities.
this
 essay will be discussed various avenues rather than traditional ones. On the one hand,
English
 has become the most spoken and written
language
 all over the world. It can help to improve the business between two or more countries.
However
, there are several nations are present in which the
English
language
 is not that much popular. For getting advanced information many students migrate to
English
-speaking nations after that they can become aware of the world's culture.
On the other hand
, for learning
English
 languages there are reasonable options are available rather than going to an abroad nation from our own hometown. The most popular is you can easily learn and speak with the help of internet websites.
For instance
, In India, many students who want to speak the
English
language
 can learn through YouTube, Google, and zoom applications. It is very useful if you learn one at any time.
Therefore
, those who can not afford to travel to an
English
-speaking country to learn the
language
 can as well stay in their country to learn it effectively. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
although
 travelling to an
English
-speaking nation is the best way to learn
English
, one can still learn
this
language
 in their hometown. I recommend that when people cannot afford to travel out to study, they can
also
 stay in their country to learn it in their various
English
-speaking schools.
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