Recently more and more people use the internet to buy goods .What do you think are the advantages and disdvantages of this phenomenon.

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of social networking in
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world makes
people
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life so easy that now they choose to do shopping online which has both the cons and
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pros
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that we will discuss in
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essay. To commence with, online shopping is so good in saving human efforts and time.
Hence
, there is no need to get ready , find a partner for shopping and go to the market.
Moreover
, there are numerous options are available just a click far for different goods.
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,
people
can order anything from all over the world .
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the opposite
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side, technology increased the chances of security issues like hacking
due to
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people
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their money or other crucial information regards to them.
Furthermore
,
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a plethora
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of greedy
people
are
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taking advantage of
this
online platform to do fraudulent activities.
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months ago,
i
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order some clothes but when got a parcel it was filled with papers and some sort of weight to match the weight.
To conclude
, Everything has both negative and positive sides so folks should be aware to get
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benefit of
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bountiful
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • variety
  • price comparison
  • fraud
  • data breaches
  • local businesses
  • delivery issues
  • return and refund policies
  • consumer satisfaction
  • online retailers
  • physical inspection
  • hassle-free
  • shipping
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