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In most countries, the number of people owning their private car is on the rise. Is this positive or negative development?

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Nowadays people tend to buy their own
car
. We realize that
,
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 the
number
 of people who buy their own
car
 is getting increase. In my view, they are more negative effects on development than positive ones.
Firstly
, if you have your own
car
, not only you can go where you what but
also
 it gives comfort.
For example
, if you travel
with
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 your own
car
 you can read a book and watch something or you can do whatever you want
instead
 of
this
 thing is difficult to do it public transport.
On the other hand
, private
car
 is more expensive than public transport. Because you have to pay taxes,
also
 it happens often. I mean that penalty, fuel cost or
car
 repairing cost and you need a garage.
On the contrary
, public transport is more friendly budget.
Furthermore
, private cars make traffic jams so people waste their time queueing for hours. Even though, currently, public transports are more developed in terms of faster.
In addition
,
private
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car
 has a bad effect on the environment. Because
everyday
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number
 of private
car
 rise. So it causes to increase
the
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number
 of carbon dioxide. As we know carbon dioxide is harmful to people’s health. And another these type of harmful gas which is released on cars causes to arise in ozone layer problems. And
this
 is not only people’s problem but
also
 affects on earth.
As a consequence
,
increase
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 in the
number
 of private cars
give
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 us comfort but
also
it
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causes some tax problems or negative effects on
environment
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the environment
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. So
this
 bad effect leads to negative development.
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