Many countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so? What can be done to change their views?

It is argued that the international travel industry has a negative influence.
This
essay discusses what I believe are the causes of
this
and states some solutions. There are two main reasons why I strongly believe are the rude attitudes of foreign
visitors
,
such
as ignorance of precautions stated to them by their guides and breaking the rules even though some of these are illustrated in various languages. These actions lead to crucial damage to the sightseeing spots, including places with splendent nature, ancient ruins and heritage structures. In Japan, the mountain called Takao-San has suffered from deforestation because of the actions of overseas tourism,
such
as littering. Another reason behind
this
argument is
noise
pollution
. The public transportation systems of many cities can not cope with excessive
visitors
, who do not have any choice except to use taxis.
As a result
, it causes
noise
pollution
, preventing inhabitants to live in tranquil circumstances. Regarding the solutions, providing the construction of the fence to protect these significant materials from
visitors
’ actions. Many exhibition sites tend not to protect their exhibits by using glasses or ropes because they want
visitors
to deepen their understanding of these materials.
However
, it is the most important thing to display them in intact conditions even if these protections might become obstacles to
visitors
’ sightseeing. In Kyoto,
for instance
, the wall of many temples are protected by grids made of metal.
In addition
, to reduce
noise
pollution
, it would be effective to introduce another public transport line, especially trains. To promote foreigners to use trains, the volume of traffic, which is one of the causes of taxis, would decrease and it leads to the reduction of
noise
pollution
. In conclusion, the main reasons for the arguments against foreign
visitors
are breaking rules by them and
noise
pollution
generated by an excessive amount of traffic. The best solutions are the introduction of protections for important materials and additional transport lines.
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