Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?
Recently the issue has been brought into focus. Nowadays, it is common to see
stars
in their lives speaking about almost everything that may not be related to their career and profession and have created a great impact on their admirers. I believe that it is a negative and positive development. In the following paragraphs, I will propagate my views on this
phenomenon.
We may mention the indisputable fact that film stars
as well as
famous people
take advantage of their influence to gain people
's trust, making people
believe and follow them to advertise untrue products. For example
, in Vietnam, there are many famous stars
selling live streams of products such
as medicine and functional foods everywhere, of unknown origin. Has negative effects on users and affects human health. Although
this
issue has had the intervention of state agencies, these actions cannot be prevented. Everyone needs to take preventive measures to avoid encountering bad cases like this
again.
Another special consideration in this
case is that there are still beautiful stories that stars
bring. They use their fame to spread good messages in life. Because they have influence
on many social networking platforms. That influence can spread to Add an article
an influence
people
so they can act accordingly
. For example
, during the recent floods in the Central region, stars
posted propaganda information calling on people
to donate rice, food, and support people
during the floods, and then
they received a lot of money. money and food from sponsors and people
across the country. Besides
these good deeds, there are still cases of stealing money to put into one's own account. These problems should be overcome and resolved once and for all .
In summary, it is important movie stars
and celebrities must be more careful when sharing their opinions on public issues that have little to do with their profession.Submitted by sinh.ielts on
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