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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart indicates the amount of
precipitation
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 and
temperature
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 in Kolkata during the year.
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, the highest figure for
precipitation
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 is
in
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between July and September,
while
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 that
of
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for
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temperature
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 is in from April to June. Especially, the
precipitation
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 and
temperature
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 are
showen
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shown
different
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in different
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pattern
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. In detail, the
precipitation
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 of Kolkata
start
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 from about 20mm in January, increasing slightly
at
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 100mm over the next 4
months
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. In June, the
precipitation
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 increase significantly from May to July, which reached a
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peak
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 at approximately 340mm. After that, It decrease to 150mm in October, which is
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half
compare
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compared
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 to
September
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the September
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 figure. Over the next 2
months
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, the
precipitation
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drop
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 dramatically by around 140mm in December. In terms of
temperature
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, it
start
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 from 200, increasing steadily to just over 300 for the next 4
months
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. Between May and August, the
temperature
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decrease
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 slightly
at
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 around 280, which is no change until the next month. Over the 3
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, it
drop
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 again
at
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 just over 200mm.
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