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Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is controversial whether lawbreakers should be sent to prison or whether it is better to choose the talented crowd for good causes and make them productive.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail. From my perspective, lawbreakers should serve the best for the vicious crime they have committed, there should not be any violation of the law.
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, isolating them from the nation can be beneficial for the country’s safety. They should receive adequate punishments and realize their faults for committing a crime before they are released into society ,
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 those wrongdoers will commit more crimes as a habit. Some criminals even with rehabilitation centres and jail time turn towards misconduct.
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 criminals with professional talents or who have the potential for improvement should be granted an opportunity to work under imprisonment, so when they are released,they have plenty of skills and expertise
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 they can start their life again in a better way. For
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 they can easily do handyman jobs like plumbing, construction , and electrician, and rather chose to study and became professionals like lawyers, doctors and many more, they can earn and make living after having the knowledge for it. In my conclusion, criminals should be trained under imprisonment for a better future and
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 to not fall back into another crime and others should be disciplined
accordingly
. For closure, equal rights should be presented for the type of criminal.
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