Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few people believe that environmental contamination and housing are the predominant issues that all the authorities should concentrate on diminishing in order to preempt sickness and other health problems. I completely agree with the fact that these two things contribute to the majority of the health issues that exist today and can be avoided by improving on these two aspects.
First and foremost, different types of pollution like air, water and soil which are resulting from industrialisation, technology, automobiles, and extreme usage of plastic and electronic products have been evolving day by day leading to a potential environmental catastrophe in future.
For instance
, with every new vehicle on the road, the emission of gasses into the air increases causing an imbalance in the oxygen levels due to
pollution with other dangerous gases. Consequently
, whoever inhales it would suffer from lung and other organ diseases over a period of time. In addition
, industrial and human waste into seawater induces the death of water habitat which ultimately leads to ecological imbalance. Similarly
, e-wastes
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e-waste
are
disposed into soil plunges nutrients and reduces the yield Correct subject-verb agreement
is
as well as
the quality.
Secondly
, many people across the world who are below the poverty line couldn't
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accommodate
rent or own a house for themselves, Verb problem
afford
therefore
, end up living in slums with poor hygienic conditions. As a consequence
, they are easily prone to serious medical risks and also
infect other human beings who are less immune in one or the other way. Nowadays, infections proliferate swiftly without human contact and covid-19 is one such
example. Hence
, the government must step in and ensure that every individual resides in a hygienic location.
To conclude
, it is the responsibility of every individual to contribute their part in order to reduce pollution and housing problems however
concerned authorities should enforce the regulations required to keep them under control. As a result
, there would be a reduction in health problems.Submitted by prudhvi.pinninti18 on
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