Some people think that one of the best solution to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the increasing
pollution
of the
environment
,some
persons
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people
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deem that one of the best ways to solve the
environment
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environmental
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problem
according
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to increase the price of
fules
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fuels
fuel
.But
i
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do not think
that is
the best solution. Some folks believe that one of the best
solution
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to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of
fuels
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fuel
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for
cars
and other vehicles.Because higher
fuels
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fuel
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prices increased people’s
spanding
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spending
on
cars
and other vehicles so people will reduce the frequency of using
cars
.Tail gas
include
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carbon monoxide ,sulfur dioxide and other gases harmful to
environment
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the environment
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,it can cause air
pollution
and
green house
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greenhouse
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effect or acid rain.
So
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increase
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the price of
fules
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fuel
can help to protect the
environment
.
However
,I deem that way can not solve the problems from the root.Because
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the environment
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environment
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environmental
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pollution
problem
is a complex
problem
,it can
divided
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into air
pollution
,land
pollution
and water
pollution
.
Vihicles
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Vehicles
and car tail gas just occupied a small proportion. If it can be solved ,
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the environment
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environment
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environmental
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problem
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can not
be solve
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absolutely
because
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water and land
pollution
.
In addition
,if the cost of
fuels
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fuel
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increased
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,there will be some rich folks
use
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the
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cars
as usual.So I consider that the better solution is that
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goverment
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government
should encourage bicycle companies to dispense a certain amount of free cycling cards to
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the citizen
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citizen
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,
this
can attract some people to choose
this
environmental
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frendily
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friendly
to commute. In conclusion,increasing the cost of the
fules
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fuels
files
indeed a good way to relieve the
environment
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environmental
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problem
,but
i
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I
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think
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provide
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free and
environmental
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friendly transportation to people is a more adaptive way and can solve
this
problem
more effectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental preservation
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Green technologies
  • Alternative energy sources
  • Renewable energy
  • Fuel-efficient vehicles
  • Electric vehicles (EVs)
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic impact
  • Consumer behavior
  • Disproportionate effect
  • Government subsidies
  • Comprehensive policies
  • Cost-effective solutions
  • Carbon footprint reduction
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