The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the majority of both sexes' university graduates in Canada over a decade of 15 years.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of males and
females
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increased over the given period, with a higher trend for
females
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According to
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the data, the
number
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of
females
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, followed by a slight rise for 4 years reached almost 105000.
Also
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, the
number
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experienced a fluctuation from 1996 to 2002 with an upward trend
at the end
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.
In addition
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, In 2002, 110000
females
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graduated, which increased dramatically and reached approximately 150000, the highest
number
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.
Furthermore
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of men graduates is extremely fewer than
females
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. In 1992, with a 30000 difference from
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, 70000 men graduated.
This
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figure followed an increase until 1996 and after that fluctuated for 4 years with a downward trend, 75000 in 2000.
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, the corresponding figure had a steady rise until 2006 and reached around 100000, which is still less than the women who graduated
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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