Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Many countries build specific places to offer the tough

athletes

the

speacilised

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specialised

facilities to target international sports, and not every resident can

use

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. I think it is important to have a place for sports

players

to practice and I will express my opinion in

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essay. In my point of view, I believe that providing

a private training spaces

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a private training space

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and equipment for special sports is an important support.

In other words

, it is hard for professional

athletes

and general residents because their goals and emotions are different. Professional

athletes

have to analyse each time

while

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they do training to figure out their process and make another plan to achieve their goals for the next training;

however

, general citizens, they workout because of health, and they do not have a serious target to achieve or under high pressure to win prizes for their countries.

Therefore

, the specialised facilities make the professional

players

can practice their weaknesses to improve their skills for the next competition.

In addition

, the private space makes the

players

concentrate on their own training without

distract

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distraction

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. Though there are many advantages

for

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the spaces that governments supply, there are

also

drawbacks.

For example

, when

athletes

have trained from time to time, they might forget about their original

mind

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and lose their motivation in the end;

however

, practising with everyone can help them find the motivation to continue their

career

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careers

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. Sometimes, doing exercise with residents can

also

make a professional player gets new ideas to improve their methods for training. In conclusion, though it is unfair that the governments build facilities for specific

players

to use, I think it is important to have a private and professional space for them to perform their training process. It will help them concentrate on their program without

distract

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distraction

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and

get

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unnecessary injuries