Nowadays, more teenagers want to become famous actors or singers. Why do you think this is happening ? Is this a positive or negative development ?

The development of social media makes

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a famous actor or singer easier than in the past.

As a result

,

this

is the dream job of many people, and

this

phenomenon is caused by

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of becoming famous, and rich easily with little effort. In many

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opinions,

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development.

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with, not investing too much time,

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they can be received an ideal life with fame, and wealth,

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is one of the most common reasons for

this

phenomenon.

First,

they do not how the stars

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or their special talent.

Second,

they lack

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knowledge about high competition in the entertainment industry, and minority successes,

hence

they think it is

easily

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to become an idol.

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, Michael Jackson is the most popular singer in pop music,

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however

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most people do not know he spends a large amount of his time

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new audio and has trained since being a child.

Moreover

, it can have numerous negative impacts on teenagers. Their simple awareness can not guard

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risks, and even worse they can face up with unemployment because of spending too much time on becoming famous without success.

Furthermore

, they do not how much money should be spent to create a new entertainment product, which can cause a financial burden.

For instance

, millions of music video are uploaded to social media every day ,

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a few of them is popular, and

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artist can earn money from them.

To sum up

, the dream of becoming a famous actor or singer is not wrong, but adolescents should consider

cautiously

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,

otherwise

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it may harm

for

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their growth.