Scientific researches should be the responsibility of government rather than commercial organisations. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that

instead

of

bussiness

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business

organizations, scientific searches ought to be

caried

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carried

out by governments. I totally agree with

this

idea

and believe that it is the best solution for society.

To begin

with, the first and the most important reason why I agree with

this

phenomenon is that

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researhes

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research

can be controlled easily by the

goverment stafs

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government staff

. Thanks to

this

decision, more and more searches may be conducted for humanity. The second reason why I agree with

this

idea

is that it could be

usefull

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useful

for every people.

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, during the

corona virus

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has

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spreaded

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all

of

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the world, many people

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got the reach covid vaccine with the

government

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supporting

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.

Therefore

, I consider that it is

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impressive and

benefical

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beneficial

idea

.

In addition

to these notions, another reason

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which

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this

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phenomenon is that it may cause wrong consequences.

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, most

of

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people claimed that

covid

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the

virus

have been

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occured

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occurred

in a laboratory in Wuhan because of medical commercials.

Although

many studies say

thay

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that

this

argument is not true, many

population

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still believe that.

Moreover

, a scientific

invent

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should not be transformed

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commercial thing.

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, only

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population may use it.

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, I strongly think that

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governments make control scientific investigations in order to prevent bad consequences. In conclusion, scientific investments

are

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carried out by the governments is

the

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very good

idea

and I agree with it because

of making

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control

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controls

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and

preventing

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bad events. If

this

way is put into practice, it will have beneficial solutions for humanity.