Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, most

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multinational companies apply advertisements by using different types of communication methods to motivate people to purchase their products. In

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essay, I will suppose that it is a significant marketing

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strategy

as well as

, sometimes customers don’t

focuss

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focus

on these

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communicational

adds

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ads

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. On the one hand, in

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contemporary society, consumers have so many alternatives for every

products

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.

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of

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huge competition that made between manufacturing companies. So, they use

advertisement

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advertisements

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to persuade their productions.

For instance

, most of the businessmen who manufacture tea products and beverages, show that it will help to increase immunity during Covid-19,

consequently

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market

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strategy

causes to rise

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profits in the

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global

market. If they didn’t advertise

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message through mass media and social media, they can't reach

such

a high level of capital during the pandemic situation. In my opinion, advertising can make

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impact psychologically,

moreover

, it is the best way to capture the market and build up

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expensive brand.

On the other hand

, with the advancement in science and technology, people can neglect these terrible psychological persuading.

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, we can skip and block the

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which are come

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our social media

account

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and websites.

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, technical experts know that disturbs us to continue our activities, so they introduce new apps to prevent

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adds

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. Not only that but

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people are intelligent to understand and control their feelings ,so, they always try to skip

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these

advertisments

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advertisements

.

To sum up

, I can conclude that

advertisement

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advertisements

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can attract more new markets and

buyer

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buyers

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powerfulness, but I think

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should be monitored,

otherwise

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it will damage

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society by giving negative effects.

Nevertheless

,

government

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must interfere to solve and make new rules and

gulations

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regulations

for that.