Some people suggest that setting up more gyms will encourage people to remain active. What problems are associated with this proposal? What solutions can you offer for good health?

It is believed by many folks that manufacturing more gyms will cheer up people to be energetic,

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would cause some problematic issues for the below reasons.

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,with more places for exercising and constructing

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it will end up in air pollution because of the high buildings ,

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bad occurrences may happen.

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two centuries,we can note that the number of people who got

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setting up more constructions was increasing and it was so

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for humans' healthiness.

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,if the government spend most of

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earnings on sport facilities or somewhere for playing and discharging our energy,other principles of society will be forgotten,

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as public demonstrations, business,educational and political groups that

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lack income for development.

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,the maximum money that was paid for schools and their equipment was about 134000& in 1998 in Britain, something much less than what gyms cost in that year. By the way,we can replace other activities to be more powerful and in a good shape including good eating habits, non-smoking, yoga classes for our

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function,etc.

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,if you want to lose weight,you have to go on a diet and prevent eating fatty foods

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drinking a lot of water.

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is so effective and helpful, it can't work in all situations because some people are overweighed genetically.

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,as I reiterate my sayings, creating more buildings has some drawbacks near encouraging juveniles to train ,

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can be solved.