Some people suggest that setting up more gyms will encourage people to remain active. What problems are associated with this proposal? What solutions can you offer for good health?

It is believed by many folks that manufacturing more gyms will cheer up people to be energetic,

while

I personally think that

this

would cause some problematic issues for the below reasons.

Firstly

,with more places for exercising and constructing

further

stadiums

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it will end up in air pollution because of the high buildings ,

then

bad occurrences may happen.

For example

, through the

last

two centuries,we can note that the number of people who got

asma

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asthma

from air impurity

due to

setting up more constructions was increasing and it was so

hazard

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for humans' healthiness.

Secondly

,if the government spend most of

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earnings on sport facilities or somewhere for playing and discharging our energy,other principles of society will be forgotten,

such

as public demonstrations, business,educational and political groups that

seems

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of

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lack income for development.

For instance

,the maximum money that was paid for schools and their equipment was about 134000& in 1998 in Britain, something much less than what gyms cost in that year. By the way,we can replace other activities to be more powerful and in a good shape including good eating habits, non-smoking, yoga classes for our

brains'

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function,etc.

For example

,if you want to lose weight,you have to go on a diet and prevent eating fatty foods

besides

drinking a lot of water.

Although

this

is so effective and helpful, it can't work in all situations because some people are overweighed genetically.

To sum up

,as I reiterate my sayings, creating more buildings has some drawbacks near encouraging juveniles to train ,

inwhich

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in which

which

by changing it to other activities

it

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can be solved.