You have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter . explain why you would like the job . give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. .say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, It is with great pleasure and gladness that I am writing to you. I came across an advertisement in an Australian magazine for the position of a stay-in nanny. It is with much excitement that I write to you to show my interest in

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position. I will be more than happy if I am given an opportunity to take up

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role. I love the nanny job because,

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get to watch the kids grow, teach them new things and celebrate each new stage of their life alongside them. I love being trusted with the safety and well-being of children. I am a suitable person for

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job because I love children and I am very much passionate about being around them. I am a very patient person, punctual, flexible, trustworthy and proactive.

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in Australia,

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will use my free time to work out, socialise and network.

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will be a perfect time too to rest from my busy activities. I really pray and hope that you consider me for

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role. Yours sincerely, Yvonne Forbanka.

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Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Why is this case? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

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