The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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In the diagram life cycle of a honey bee is
being
shown. In Unnecessary verb
apply
general
Add a comma
,general
this
cycle takes thirty-four to thirty-six Linking Words
days
.
The cycle starts when females lay their Use synonyms
eggs
. Use synonyms
Actually
they lay one or two Add a comma
,Actually
eggs
once Use synonyms
in
every three Change preposition
apply
days
. Use synonyms
Thoose
Correct your spelling
Those
eggs
hatch after nine or ten Use synonyms
days
depending on environmental and Use synonyms
genetical
variations. After hatching of the Replace the word
genetic
Use synonyms
eggs
it took five Add a comma
,eggs
days
for nymphs to get out of their Use synonyms
eggs
. Since Use synonyms
then
they start emerging Linking Words
to
young Change preposition
as
adults
slowly. The nymphs can moult three times as they grow and in Use synonyms
general
Add a comma
,general
this
happens in fifteen Linking Words
days
. It can be understood that they have become young Use synonyms
adults
by looking Use synonyms
stripes
on their Change preposition
at stripes
back
Fix the agreement mistake
backs
,
if Remove the comma
apply
Linking Words
this
stripes have emerged it means Change the determiner
these
thatb
the nymphs have become young Correct your spelling
that
adults
.When they become young Use synonyms
adults
they have just one more step left for being a mature honey Use synonyms
bee
. That Fix the agreement mistake
bees
last
step takes four Linking Words
days
to become an adult. After being Use synonyms
adult
females start laying their Fix the agreement mistake
adults
eggs
in three Use synonyms
days
and they continue their life as adult honey bees.Use synonyms
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