You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college manager . In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved
I am writing to draw your attention to the
cafeteria
service at college that needs some improvements.
I have been eating food
from the cafeteria
for one year.I have found its food
quality is not lower than a three-star restaurant and prices
were cheaper as compared to other colleges.
Although
,
they have maintained Remove the comma
apply
food
quality, recently the owner of the cafeteria
has revised the prices
. An abrupt change in the price list is unaffordable for students
. they have doubled the prices
of those food
items that have been sold out quickly.
secondly
, they have reduced their sitting area and replaced it with a dish-washing space. students
usually have to wait for half an hour to find out a place to sit and have some food
. Visitors usually struggle to get out of the sitting area. due to
the overcrowded cafeteria
at lunchtime, students
have to buy foodstuff from hawkers outside. I have noticed absentees in my class is
increasing Correct subject-verb agreement
are
due to
stomach pain and eating unhygienic food
from outside.
As a solution, I would recommend you take notice of the revised prices
and make them affordable for students
. secondly
, it would be appreciated if you could broaden the space in the cafeteria
so that students
do not have to wait for a longer time in queue.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by mehwishpeter.est on
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The Greeting
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Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
