You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:- 1. describe your situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear sir/madam, My name is David and I am a second-year degree student in the college.I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to the issues that I face in my accommodation. I live in room no:52 and I share my room with another student from the campus.I find it very difficult to continue my current accommodation as it badly affects my academic time. We are two individuals with different interests and characters. I would like to let you know that the noise from my roommate spoils my concentration and I am unable to study well. He always sings loudly and plays the tape recorder at a high volume. I have requested him to co-operate with me but the response was not in my favour. I request you to arrange for me a single room accommodation as early as possible. I would like to inform you that I will be happy if you could do the needful. Thank you for reading
this
letter and I expect a positive outcome. Yours sincerely
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