Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, most communities believe that young

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's lives are full of stress.

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, some others think living is easier for teenagers. In

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essay, I will describe both points of view and

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, I will give my opinion. On the one hand, the

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young

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more and more comfortable ways to live.

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, parents do not expect their children to work and make money until 18.

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, most of them prepare a good atmosphere at home for their students to study and make themselves educated.

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, social media and networking sites have made making friends and meeting peers more modest for them.

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, most parents apply more and more pressure on their children to study and get high marks in school and college.

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way of upbringing brings anxiety to youth life. to illustrate, I have a friend in high school who really imprisoned himself in his room and only studied for the university entrance exam.

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, because of his unbelievable stress on exam day, he

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not present a qualified performance.

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, in our society, the age of marriage has increased

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the unemployment of young

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until 30.

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, they will be parents in their old age and it is hard for old

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to tackle children. In conclusion, It is true that technology, the internet, and urban life prepare pleasant tools for an easier life for teenagers.

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, long-term school, unemployment until 30, marriage in old age, and starting to make money after 25 make their lives full of stress and anxiety.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money that they make because of their positive effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affects teenagers’ literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Some parents think children's behaviour should be strictly controlled, while other parents think children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give examples

Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?