Car drivers and cyclists share the same road, and this causes problems for both of them. Why is this case? What are the measures to solve these problems?

These days, the number of people riding bikes
are
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is
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increasing.
However
, the
concorrency
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concurrency
for space by cars and bicycles
in
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on
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roads
or streets brings some matters. In
this
essay, I will discuss some problems and
to
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propose some solutions. Two main problems are caused by the sharing of
roads
for these vehicles. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that some cities are not prepared to run with so many cyclists without
create
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creating
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a problem for the
trafic
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traffic
. What I mean
with
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it is that
in
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the majority,
cities
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of cities
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use to create a side road to cyclists ride their bikes, but they just reduce the
cars
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car's
cars'
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spaces to create some
bikes
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bike
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spaces. A good solution for
this
matter is the creation of a long road
arround
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around
the main areas
instead
to reduces the main
roads
. Take the UK
for example
, which has a good chain of cycling
roads
through the
crawded
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crowded
areas but without
to divide
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dividing
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their spaces. Another cause is that the drivers do not respect people
those
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who are riding. In their majority, they feel
responsable
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responsible
for the streets and, sometimes, discuss with those who are not driving in order to clear the path. In some countries, like Brazil, laws were
intensificated
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intensified
intensification
to support
who
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those who
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are rinding and
this
is an action to be followed by other countries.
Although
this
transport represents the majority of injury in the
trafic
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traffic
, the number of users
are
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is
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growing more
then never
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than ever
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, and in
this
country
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,country
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drivers
cohesist
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coexist
consist
with bicyclists. All things in consideration, changes never come easy. It is necessary to take some actions in order to support both sides and in order to make
the
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apply
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trafic
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traffic
safe for everybody, it would be advisable for the government not only to invest in educational
trafic
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traffic
programs
,
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but
also
in better
roads
for those rides.
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