The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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The provided bar chart illustrates the percentages in terms of households in two accommodation types (owned and rented) in England and Wales between the period of 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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, households in owned accommodations increased during the period,
while
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it reduced in rented accommodations.
Besides
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, the highest amount
families
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who owned a house was in 2011, and the highest number of
families
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who had rented places was during the year 1918. The number of
families
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who had rented
houses
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started at around 78% and it is around 3 times who had own
houses
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.
However
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, the number of house-owned
families
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increased gradually and reached 50% in 1971, which is the same percentage that rent
houses
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accounted for in 1971.
Moreover
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, from 1918 to 1971, two years had the same proportions for each type; in 1939 and 1953 proportions for rented and owned households accounted for just under 70% and just above 30% respectively.
In addition
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, after 1971 the figures for rented
houses
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fell and met a low of approximately 31% in 2001 and rose back closer to 35%.
On the other hand
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group of house-owned people climbed to the peak of around 69% in 2001 and fell to 62%
at the end
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of the period.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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