The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides data on the number of men and women in the gym over 30 years period between 1980 and 2010.
figure for males fell drastically and was overtaken by women.
In the remained duration, the figure for female
Overall
, while
figures for female gyn membership
saw an upwards trend, figures for males decreased over the whole period. Despite this
, in 2005 men's membership
reached its peak.
In 1980 around 2000 males had a membership
to the gym whereas
1000 memberships were owned by women. In the following 1985, both figures rose twice as much as in 1980 and were 2000 and 4000 respectively. By the next decadeAdd a comma
,
membership
fluctuated, then
it declined slightly and eventually at the end
of the cycle was on
almost 1000 higher than in 1980. Men's memberships went up enormously reaching Change preposition
apply
its
' peak in 2005 at 500 memberships. Correct pronoun usage
their
Then
, however
, it declined by around 5 times and was about 600.Submitted by prostoy.pacan4ek on
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