The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The pie charts compare the opinions of full-time and part-time
students
about their university services, including IT
support
and opening
hours
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there was more positive feedback with regard to the opening
hours
than the IT
support
.
Also
, full-time
students
tended to be more satisfied with the two services than their part-time counterparts. Regarding IT
support
, over half of the surveyed full-time
students
said that they were very happy with
this
service,
while
only a fifth of part-time
students
reported that they were very happy.
In contrast
, just 15% of the
students
studying full-time were not satisfied with IT
support
, in comparison with 45% of part-time scholars. The proportion of both types of
students
being quite happy with
this
service was relatively the same, at about one-third. The majority of full-time and part-time scholars felt very happy with the current opening
hours
, at 87% and 72% respectively. Only 1% of the examined full-time
students
were not satisfied with the opening
hours
whereas
the figure for part-time
students
was a little higher, at 5%. The remaining 12% of the surveyed full-time
students
felt quite happy with
this
service, as opposed to nearly a quarter of part-time
students
.
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