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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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Around the globe, travelling to other countries is really common these days. Foreign travellers’ spending is essential for many countries to use for economic growth,
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, it would affect the local community. In my opinion, I think It has great benefits for those areas even at the national level.
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, some disadvantages would not be avoided. I think the great benefit for the local economy and more investment in the
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. Travellers give their money for products and services to local
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. They can afford to survive and continue running the business.
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, there is a new delicious restaurant located in the old
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social online booming,
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area
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 has started to be popular again. Local communities get a chance to make more money.
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, the local government tends to support and develop infrastructure for transport and rebuild the livable city.
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, some places have many foreign
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 coming to visit a lot. It is a profound opportunity for students to practice languages and connect to the outside world
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 as different cultures and perspectives.
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, environmental drawbacks and the effect on local daily life would happen when foreigners travel to any place. They may not follow the rule and norms to be aware of environmental protection.
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, some
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 would throw waste through the sea ,especially plastic material. As the result, marine animals,
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 as turtles and whales, would be died because the plastic struggles in their lung when eating it. The lack of serious implementation of the law is
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 the problem that let
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care about the impact on the environment.
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, crime is likely to occur more in popular places because there are many strangers in the
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. It decreases the sense of community.
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, most local
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 know each other and they really take care of their place. In another case, some travellers get drunk and make a loudly. It is annoying to local
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. In conclusion, international travel would bring growth to the economy and society but it would be affected local
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 if the government did not take action to control the travellers’ behaviour.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enormous benefit
  • impact
  • local inhabitants
  • environment
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • advantages
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • cultural exchange
  • infrastructure development
  • promotion
  • local products
  • environmental impact
  • exploitation
  • resources
  • cultural erosion
  • increased cost of living
  • overcrowding
  • congestion
  • balancing
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
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