The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram explains the way of renewing used plastic
bottles
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.
Overall
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, there are nine stages in the process, starting from the role of humans to
putting
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the plastic
bottles
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into the recycling bin, until producing the end products which could be in various forms
such
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as clothes, pencils, bags, etc.
To begin
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this
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process, the recycle bin that has a load of
bottles
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is collected by trucks before starting the operation. The aim of sorting is to acquire the eligibility of the
bottles
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,
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so that it will be easier to compress them into blocks.
Following
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this
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, the cube of
bottles
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are being crushed until it shifts to scatters by two sharp blades and is directly placed into the water for washing. These small pieces are now processed to make pellets using a generator. In the subsequent stage, the pellets go through a heating process to form a row material. These raw materials as the base product are necessary to make other plastic
bottles
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Moreover
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it can be applied in the production of private stuff
such
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as clothes, bags, or even accessories.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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