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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reason for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Energy
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 has been an important milestone throughout human history and it is obvious that human civilization depends on
energy
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.Contemporary society has recognized solar
power
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 as a promising
source
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 of domestic
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 .Its availability
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 and economically and environmentally friendly nature have obtained much attention
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 there are a few drawbacks
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 as high cost and advanced technology which are mandatory during establishment.
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 burning fossil was popular during past decades as a
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 of
energy
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 ,it was hazardous to the environment.When it comes to solar
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, it doesn't emit any carbon dioxide or any other toxin which could possibly initiate air pollution.The world is more concerned about environmental pollution and its consequences than ever and it will directly lead people to choose solar
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 as an option.
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,once the system is established,it is noticed the price of a unit of
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 is much lower than fuel-driven electricity.Most importantly the sun is a never-ending
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source
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,compared to any other ,
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 the sustainability of the
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 is undoubted,making people much inclined over it. With regard to the benefits of using the sun as a
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 of
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 enormous.As mentioned in the above paragraph , the growing trend of using
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 type is
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 its advantages.It's cheap
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 being natural and easily available.There are a few drawbacks to using solar
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.
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, it needs advanced technology in assembling which
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 professional knowledge.
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, In. Srilanka there are dedicated companies that consist of professionals in mounting solar panels and individuals cannot get it done by themselves.
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 the capital expenditure is much more expensive as it requires specialized knowledge. These solar panels are not produced in every country,so sometimes they have been imported which again draws money from the consumer. In conclusion,solar
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 is a trending
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 of
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 in households because of its availability,low outlay and environmentally friendly manner even though it needs high capital payment and hi-tech knowledge to establish.

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Your opinion

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