Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, In today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

technology

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technological

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development brings a

cruciale

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crucial

debate among the

populations

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population

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. Some people believe that

subjects

like

science

and

technology

should be

have

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priorr

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prior

than

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to

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history

and others have the opposite

views

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view

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. In my view,

due to

advance

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advances

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in

technology

and

science

children should be

familier

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familiar

with these

type

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types

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of

subjects

. On the one

hande

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hand

, a group of individuals claim

study

history

can

brings

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bring

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to us a sense of identity.

Thus

, it is really important

to

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for to

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kids know about their country’s

history

.

Moreover

, they insist that young adults can learn a vast range of things from

study

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the study

a study

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of

histotry

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history

and

also

can

boosts

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boost

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their sense of

nasionalisti

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nationalist

nationalistic

nationalism

. “

History

reapite

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respite

reality

itself” so,

studing

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studying

history

can avoid

to make

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making

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commun

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common

mistakes that in the past occurs.

However

, I do not find

argument

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the argument

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convincing as

technology

cause

many

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much

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change

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changes

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in

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apply

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worldwide so

history

can not help us in

todays’

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today’s

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world.

On the other hand

, some individuals

justifaibly

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justifiably

argue that children should

study

about

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apply

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new

technology

and

science

in school to prepare for the near

futures

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future

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.

In other words

, kids

shoud

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should

be

familier

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familiar

with these

type

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types

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of

subjects

to

learn

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tolearn

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use them properly for

the

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apply

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their future

works

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work

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.

Furthermore

,

studing

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studying

sciences

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science

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subjects

,

such

as biology and

phsics

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physics

can improve

severals

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several

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skills in

childrens

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children

.

For example

, biology can cause a strong connection between kids and environments.

Also

,

study

technology

have

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has

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some benefits,

such

as improving analysis and

matematical

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mathematical

skills. In conclusion, the world

have

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has

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change

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changed

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dramatically because of

technology

and other

science

that

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apply

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every

days

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day's

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several things have

discovered

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been discovered

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by

scientist

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the scientist

a scientist

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.

Therfore

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Therefore

, the

subjects

should

be change

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be changed

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in schools.

Due to

widespread

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the widespread

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of

technology

children should

study

similare

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similar

subjects

in their schools.