Success without hard work is not possible . To what extent do u agree ?
We want success
as well as
prosperity in life
. But we do not do what are
needed in achieving these. If we want to make our Change the verb form
is
life
glorious, we must follow some rules. Firstly
, we have to be industrious. Since, without hard work, success in life
is impossible. Secondly
we should be sincere in our activities. Some people think that good luck is at the root of all achievements in Add a comma
,Secondly
life
. But to them
nothing is Add a comma
,them
further
from truth
than it. Because every success in Add an article
the truth
life
depends totally on our activities. If we spend time in idleness, we must suffer. Finally
we should be honest in Add a comma
,Finally
life
because this
virtue helps us greatly to gain our goal
.Fix the agreement mistake
goals
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite