The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
This
bar chart shows the proportion of men
and women
of various ages who often exercised in Australia in 2010. Overall
, the data shows that both men
and women
tend to be more physically active than young adults, but women
over 45 engage in more physical activity
than younger women
.
In 2010, more than half of Australian men
(53%) and women
(47%) aged 15 to 24 participated in regular physical activity
. While
women
engaged in similar activity
levels between the ages of 25 and 44, men
's activity
levels dropped dramatically beyond that age. Just 39.5% of men
aged 35 to 44 participated in regular exercise, whereas
a much higher percentage of women
in the same age group (52.5%) regularly exercise.
On the other hand
, women
accounted for almost 53 per cent of the group comprising adults aged 45 to 54. Although
females aged 35 to 64 had a higher participation rate in sports training than teens, the disparities between teens and the
most senior adults were less than 1%.Correct article usage
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