The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
overall
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graph shows that the trend of foreigners travelling to all the areas has increased from 1987 to 2007.
However
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, regarding the
lakes
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, the figure decreased from 2002 onward. Discussing the facts over all the years, it can be seen that people’s movement to the coast has slightly fluctuated as it went down from 40
thousand
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in 1987 which was drastically raised to more than 70
thousand
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in the year 2007 becoming the highest among all the three places.
Similarly
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, the visitor count to the
lakes
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dramatically escalated in the year 2002 after it dropped to 50
thousand
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in 2007.Regarding the mountains, figures indicate that more than 30
thousand
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in 2007 which was only 20
thousand
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in 1987. In essence, it can be clearly noticed that most of the visitors preferred the costa followed by the
lakes
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and very least favoured the mountains
although
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the figure shows an upward tendency. Despite the fact that the
lakes
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are dominant to the mountains it can be understood that it is down-turning.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words lakes, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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