The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every country around the

world

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gives importance

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and

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their historical and old building.It is very important to keep and preserve

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constructions

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for the younger

generation

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.The history of a nation plays an important role in the formation of patriotism among young adults. It gives the young

generation

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an insight into the struggle and hard work of their forefathers.Some people really think that spending more money on

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buildings

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is unnecessary rather they suggest spending the money on infrastructure development.I strongly disagree with

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statement and I believe that old

buildings

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and construction should be preserved. Old

buildings

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and

constructions

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help the young

generation

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to know about the housing style and construction method that was used in the old times. It

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helps them to know the purpose of

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constructions

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and those details can be used in their history study.

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, the Taj Mahal in India helps children to know more details about the ancient Mughal kings in India and their Kingdom. Ancient

buildings

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are

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a source of

income

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. They play an important role in tourism and attract

tourists

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from all over the

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.Travellers and researchers go all over the

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to see and study ancient

buildings

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. The arrival of

tourists

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from other countries helps the host nation to generate

income

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.

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, Pyramids are an excellent source of

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for Egypt.

Tourists

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from different parts of the

world

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often visit Pyramids.

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, I strongly believe that renovation and maintenance of ancient

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and

constructions

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are

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essential for the young

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and

tourists

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. It helps people to know about the history and the culture of ancient people.

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buildings

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attract travellers and generate

income

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for the host nations.