There is no denying the fact that shopping is becoming a favourite thing to do in their free
time
rather than involve in other stuff. I
beliveCorrect your spelling
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that youngsters
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significant addition
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other
things
.
This
essay will discuss both
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to any conclusion.
There are several
of shopping.
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is
theCorrect article usage
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good
way
to explore
things
,
as well as
spend coins.
Firstly
, young
people
can enjoy their
life
and remove stress about
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and other
things
.
they can spend
time
with their
as well they can share their
, talk
personalCorrect pronoun usage
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life
and give importance to each other.
For instance
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time
ago one of my
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said shopping is the best
way
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time
with
because we can think clearly and share our feelings wisely.
In
young
people
can explore and experience other
things
likewise
how to
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, how to deal with customers and marketing only if they want to.
On the other
if shopping is
joyfulAdd an article
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thing to do with so many benefits but it
also
has some downsides. Young
people
forget to save money and
time
, which are
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an important
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lessonFix the agreement mistake
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ofChange preposition
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life
. They take
life
so easy they
think about shopping
instead
of giving
contributionFix the agreement mistake
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inChange preposition
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other activities. I
beliveCorrect your spelling
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that for teenagers unpaid community service should be
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part of high school programs.
This
way
they learn about working for
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,
improvingCorrect word choice
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the
neighborhoodChange the spelling
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instead
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just shopping .
In conclusion,
iChange the capitalization
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do believe shopping is
excellentAdd an article
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way
of
spendChange the verb form
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money and
time
but young
people
should
also
involve in
other dayChange the wording
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to day important activities which are very useful for
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and
also
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. It's worth
to doChange the verb form
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both.