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Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #schools #students #study #home #internet
Undeniably, the
Internet
 has proven to have numerous learning materials
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 can be used in
students
' studies. Despite there are thoughts posit that learners can take full advantage and effectively pursue their
study
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 online, I still believe that remote study will not lead to the complete extinction of traditional schools. It is doubtful
that
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whether the
students
 can find all the necessary materials online.
Although
 it seemed that the
Internet
 is free and open to everyone, the copyright laws and regulation still acts as a barrier that prevents
students
 from seeking references or textbooks freely.
Moreover
, some of the online information
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 unreliable, presented examples showed that the historical facts may be changed and in some cases, artificial intelligence including GPTs generates completely fake facts that undoubtfully misguide inexperienced
Internet
 users
such
 as
students
.
Thus
, It is questionable that
students
 can find whatever they want and
thus
 learn well through the
Internet
. It is
also
 very ridiculous to claim that conventional schools are useless solely judging by the study itself. School educa
tion
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in
 provides
further
 more than just teaching knowledge to
students
. Considering that school education usually involves cooperation and teamwork, a student can gradually gain knowledge in the area of social abilities and
by contrast
, online learning usually equals an isolated, atom-like environment, that does no good to the social adaption for
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future life.
Although
 it is undeniable that the growing trend of online learning exists, my view is that
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traditional schools will not become extinct, but in order to increase
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learning efficiency and improve the learning experience, a moderate combination of online learning with offline learning may be a good idea.
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